Dear Romeo,
I, Benvolio am writing to you about the upcoming costume party hosted by the Capulets. I on,y have a few things to say to you to get you ready for then. First off, it's a costume party, so wear something funny or appealing. Don't go in regular clothes or you will make us all look bad. Second, don't be a sad sack he whole time. I know you're in love and it's sad, but maybe you can find someone new here. Meet some new people, because that's what this opportunity is bringing to you. Lastly, enjoy yourself, the party is going to be fun, so do don't ruin it for yourself.
Good to see a "sad sack" integration. But please proofread prior to submitting. Also, this should have been 2 paragraphs with a quote properly introduced.
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